My essay on marriage in Pride and Prejudice needs to be more detailed. I need to have a clearer point to each paragraph. The essay needs to show the main idea more effectively. I stated quite a few examples, but I did not effectively use the examples to support my thesis.
The essay on Hamlet had several areas to improve on. I need to more fully develop my ideas in my essays. I also need to make sure I accurately describe the scenes from the films. I missed severals grammatical errors when I proofread my essay, and I should avoid these careless errors in the future. On my next essay, I could have another person proofread and point out any errors.
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